Tutor led formative feedback is the fuel to fire my next work, inspiring and filling me with energy. I have taken notes from my feedback discussion to construct a mind-map . I find this process consolidates learning. In addition it will act as a summary checklist for future projects.
My last comment in assessment 2 was a realisation that part way through projects I run out of energy and self -belief. This is a challenge that I have carried with me from Drawing 1. Consequently demotivation causes me to abandon my experiments and slide backwards into my comfort zone for the rest of the exercises and assessment work. The mind -map will focus my attention on key processes from PoP Learning Objective 1 while I am also attempting to learn new skills and research artist work in coming exercises. The map addresses aspects of perspective, texture and mark-making, composition and colour which then feed out to other tools to achieve these aims. I notice too that many of the skills feed back in to affect each other. I intend to look back at these regularly throughout each painting and project to keep me on track of development aims in a more considered and continuous way.

For example to achieve LO1 aims check- that my perspective works ( by observing the subject closely/ looking at lines in relation to each other/ by breaking structure into simple shapes) – this feeds into two points (1) a reminder to check back at results and build up layers giving definition and correcting mistakes and (2) picking the type of perspective that I find easiest to use effectively.
Again working quickly with raw fluidity will help me to observe effects that appear in my work – leading to checking that I use fluidity as a recognised strength as the painting progresses to new layers – then leading to checking that I use another passion of mine , curves that are built through attention to negative spaces. This pathway will remind me to keep loose and fluid using a range to techniques. Of course the dotted lines indicate that fluidity leads me back into checks and tips for mark-making. The whole process is inter- related.
Close ups of my mind-map

Mark making can be suggestive- it does not need to be refined into a polished image. Therefore it allows the mind to form its own story based on personal circumstances and preferences
Colour can suggest mood eg hot and cold , dark and light and red and green hues.
Use a viewfinder to find the most appropriate view. Noisier what is important and crop the rest.

Pay attention to definition of images. Have the discipline to slow down and use appropriate tools to make this right eg a rule for horizon and credit card for straight blades of grass- don’t be lazy and paint free-hand
Observe perspective carefully and pay attention to lines in relation to each other. Break structures into simple shapes to make this easier.
Take the time to work in layers and build these over time. This helps keep texture and thickness of paint right and enables perspective to be achieved through shade and tone and to correct image structure


Study other artist’s work so that their good and bad habits begin to subconsciously affect choices in painting
Maximise use of the type of perspective which works best for me – for now this is non- linear
Observe textures to accentuate perspective and create an illusion of touch for the viewer. Experiment with this including using non- traditional tools to encourage loose marks
Some examples from past work to start me off:

Use my tendency to work quickly as a strength- to suggest movement and energy in my work
Use negative painting to accentuate the curves and flow that I love to put into my work


Following the dotted lines would show that dramatic mark-making links into this point and suggests drama.
However I do feel that if I had looked to the other points on my check list I could have worked further on this piece. For example , while I used mark – making and fluidity of stroke for the standing stones, I ignored this in the sky and lost the chance to make it more expressive and energetic. Looking further round at perspective, I have not tried to break the sky into small segments or compare lines in relation to each other and I have not used non- linear effects like graduated tonal values in the blue. I am glad that I have begun this process and recognise that it will not happen overnight. However if reminding myself of these perspective techniques as I go through the painting reminds me to think about the possibilities open to me, I may eventually hold the techniques in my head and apply them to work automatically.




